i think i already gave you some quite constructive feedback, both here and at CM forums when you posted previously.
i said (in essense) that the ideas within your tracks were good but it needed some solid less-fancy basics underpinning everything for club sounds... less changes.
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I had an idea for a script once. It's basically Jaws except when the guys in the boat are going after Jaws, they look around and there's an even bigger Jaws. The guys have to team up with Jaws to get Bigger Jaws.... I call it... Big Jaws!!!