Message 4/9
Date: 16-Feb-05 @ 12:54 PM -
RE: Locked on feedback
hey hey... not a bad try actually. (i tend to understate things btw : )
see here- that beat in the intro is *dying* for some clicky 1/16th hats to come in hafway thru (not too loud tho, just in he background to make it roll). then the breakdown... you need some atmospheric sound in the background, pad or a drone in the intro to fill up the empty space slightly and to add some movement. then... modulate that distorted sound, maybe filter it... cause its just static right now. maybe do a little swell up with a deep bass by opening the filter slowly. then... that main bassline needs to be modulated man!!! filter it, make few variations, make it longer... do something with it!
and... it NEEDS BASS! theres no subs in this tune! woomp woomp woomp etc
see... thats almost a done track, it just needs all these little things that make a tune keep your attention from start to finish. i wouldnt change anything per se, but just add some movement to existing elements.
unless of course, you just put the whole thing together from loops which would explain the lack of variation...
is that okay, coming from a DnB head?