Message 4/10
Date: 27-Oct-04 @ 02:08 PM -
RE: GM - Deviant Tendencies
i really love everything to about 2:55.
the delicate nature with which the progression develops...the subtle unsuspecting nuances and traces of bits floating about the edges. this feels very considered and the choice of sounds and mix is great.
when you introduce the new bass sound around 3 min.....i like what it's doing but i think the sound itself could be tighter...or weirder. it feels like we know this sound a little too-well from other places. third section feels a little stiff whereas i think by the end the thing should be falling apart (disintegrating back to earthly nothingness)
or gently cascading towards a happier place.
it's my feeling that a bright joyous counterpoint is achievable even within any somber progression.
i think a sneaky playful antidote....
like bits of light bouncing and skipping off serene restive water......would be good here.
the song starts great....tighten that focus through to the end....and/or bring us back to the beginning.
it's good to hear ya making waves and ripples again.