Original Message 1/4                 Date: 04-Mar-02  @  09:08 PM   -   New track 'H2o'

keith

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Hi,would anyone be so kind as to listen to my new track 'H2o' and give me some feedback on it.

Thanx :o)

Headrush58

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Message 2/4                 Date: 04-Mar-02  @  10:30 PM   -   RE: New track 'H2o'

Deano

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Nothing very original but very nicely put
together. I think it's probably lost something in
the encoding - a bit lacking in top end sparkle.
It's not really the sort of stuff I'm into but I
thought the build-up was grand. When it all gets
going at about 2.40 the long snare sound seems to
drag it down a bit- maybe something a bit tighter
would be better. Hard to tell at streaming bitrate
though. When it breaks down to bass and drums the
snare sounds fine. 25 years eh? that's nearly as
long

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Message 3/4                 Date: 04-Mar-02  @  11:13 PM   -   RE: New track 'H2o'

panama

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IMO, it starts out too fast and the break needs to open up faster... overall, it's okay.

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Message 4/4                 Date: 05-Mar-02  @  12:04 AM   -   RE: New track 'H2o'

bedwyr

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yeah, it starts out too soon for a 7 minute track. and goes into the break too soon. i'd give it 5 lots of 8 bars b4 the break, on a 5 minute version. but i dunno shit. you've got ideas, try and make them more subtle, maybe. for me, you seem to be copying what a lot of other ppl are copying. you're in that style, so try and do something different with it. and you know that 'ambient' dededededelllooww noise? if you repeat it that often, i think you should change it more, vary it a little/lot sonically. and then stick a totally different noise the time before a break and/or kick drum back in.

and you gotta read this knowing that it's not my cup of tea.   keep doing it, keep posting.  

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