Message 5/7
Date: 07-Aug-01 @ 12:13 AM -
RE: A bit of feedback?
Hard to tell about anything other than most basic structural stuff, what with it being 24 kbps. I'm sure there's lots of nice stuff in there I'm not even hearing. So I can't really comment on the mix.
That aside, nice composition. I'd like to see you try doing something with key changes in the middle. That's just my taste thought boyo.
Lovely vocal hook though, so you should go on and work it like that.
I've found it helpfull (although time consuming) to let something sit for a few weeks without listening. Then sometimes what's been missing with up and whack you upside the head with a golden twobyfour. Always nice when that happens.