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Original Message                 Date: 07-Feb-02  @  07:12 AM   -   Listen to my 2 new songs

EcstaticHigH

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Hey everyone goto my website www.mp3.com/ecstatichigh and listen to my 2 new songs, Violet Light and Mind Factory.

Thanx for supporting me
Peace



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Message 11/23                 Date: 07-Feb-02  @  10:28 PM   -   RE: Listen to my 2 new songs

EcstaticHigH

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I appreciate your honesty. Honestly, the only track up thee that I like is Violet Light. These tracks were like part of my learning process, the first tracks that i ever made. So each time I make a new track it's better then my last one. I think where I am now with maybe Violet Light and the tracks that I'm working on right now I am happy and experienced enough that I would send them out to a label as a demo.

I mean I'm not saying these tracks are great, but listen to like Elastisize and Blinking Visions(my first 2 songs) and Compare them to Violet Light. There definitely was a huge improvement.



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Message 12/23                 Date: 07-Feb-02  @  10:56 PM   -   RE: Listen to my 2 new songs

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Listened to violet light,first of all do something with that kick and hi hats cause I listened to it fairly loud and they sit way back in the mix,I can see why you were fairly proud of it cause there is a good basic production there,cool ideas with the melody, needs a lot more variation and that wooshy fitered thing got a tad annoying after about 8 minutes of the same three notes over and over again,you might be suprised but a subtle simple sustained string might sound a bit better,even if it was varied between the two,maybe it was the mix but nothing jumped out and led the song,like the way you tried changing the tracks timbre with the bass line taking the lead,nice trick but its been done to death by now.

Overall,without my usual bullshit ranting,I'd say I liked it you have a decent trance track with potential,but it is standard run off the mill done before trance with all the tricks,experiment with your productions and don't be afraid of abrupt changes and interesting percussion.



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Message 13/23                 Date: 07-Feb-02  @  11:20 PM   -   RE: Listen to my 2 new songs

EcstaticHigH

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what exactly do you mean about the kick and high hats sitting in the back of the mix. I didn't reverb or echo them or anything so how can I make them sound better.



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Message 14/23                 Date: 07-Feb-02  @  11:22 PM   -   RE: Listen to my 2 new songs

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volume and eq



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Message 15/23                 Date: 08-Feb-02  @  12:43 AM     Edit: 08-Feb-02  |  01:33 AM   -   RE: Listen to my 2 new songs

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did you go check out prorec.com yet?

jesus



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Message 16/23                 Date: 08-Feb-02  @  01:57 AM   -   RE: Listen to my 2 new songs

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yes I've read almost every article at prorec. Which ones exactly will help me with what I need help with?



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Message 17/23                 Date: 08-Feb-02  @  02:04 AM   -   RE: Listen to my 2 new songs

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uh...not sure, man



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Message 18/23                 Date: 09-Feb-02  @  01:10 PM   -   RE: Listen to my 2 new songs

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eh, you've go to stop right now and start thinking.

here's a tip : why don't you encode a track by some producer you think is the bollox and encode it at 24/22? using the same encoder as you use for your tracks. things don't sound like shit after encoding if they sound good in the first place.

i've said this before but you just don't listen. what do i care?



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Message 19/23                 Date: 09-Feb-02  @  03:11 PM   -   RE: Listen to my 2 new songs

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it's NOT the sounds.. take that track ICEWORLD... after the portamento lead intro ends you expect it to then DO something, but no!!... instead it just stops & then there's a chunk of 16 or so bars dumped into the track doing absolutely fuck-all before the next synth part starts again - The beat NEVER picks up... at 2 minutes 59 seconds it's STILL idling along with a pruned down intro beat of basic hat & kik....

The BASSLINE IS INAUDIBLE too...

SO.... forget the 'quality of the sound when encoded' and all that pretentious bollox , sort out your structure mate...

I think the thing is we here are not going to be swayed by 'hi-fi' encoding - hi-fi OR lo-fi the STRUCTURE & PRODUCTION is going to be audible just fine no matter if it was recorded at 8 bit... 'hi-fi' quality insistance is just a ruse people use to detract from the REAL important issues...

that track starts ok, but when it SHOULD go somewhere it simply does nothing at all... the same hat/kik pattern just slung over the top as an afterthought which does nothing and goes no-where.. even an interesting pattern would be better than nothing but 4x4 kik with a simple offbeast hat ALL THE WAY THRU!!!... no layering, no building, nothing.....

I would suggest you forget about your synth parts and sort out the drums & bassline & work on producing THAT structure with a flow, builds, progresses & has excitement....

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Message 20/23                 Date: 09-Feb-02  @  03:21 PM   -   RE: Listen to my 2 new songs

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again, "Violet Light" - goes no-where... by 2.48 it hasn't done a single thing... bored, turn off.. next...

"Mind Factory" - again, goes no-where... by 2.00 it hasn't done a single thing... bored, turn off.. what you need to do is dump the first 2 minutes cos the track starts around then...but by 3.38 there's still not even a beat introduced!!

this seems to be a recurring theme in your work therefore, and I suggest a solution.

GO CLUBBING!!!!!..  

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I had an idea for a script once. It's basically Jaws except when the guys in the boat are going after Jaws, they look around and there's an even bigger Jaws. The guys have to team up with Jaws to get Bigger Jaws.... I call it... Big Jaws!!!



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