i'm ready,
tone was good on vocal. couldn't understand most of what she was saying, even on this thousand dollar monitor i'm using. most of all, the music was great sounding. nice and chill. nicely mixed. I didn't like the added organ track towards the end... I would turn the track off instantly.
your life,
vox doesnt blend with the percussion... I would try something else or have none. her voice is sweet but is dissconnected somehow ---> prolly the percussion and bassline. her voice sounds more atmospheric.
I would listen to the first track b4 the second. sounds independent; film independent.
IMO