Message 8/19
Date: 13-Nov-04 @ 03:13 PM -
RE: WMDs: New Lucid Skies track
nice-sounding track mike....but for me it seems we're lacking a truly clinching melodic theme which tops off the sentiment conveyed. ...which is fear and sadness.
in other words...the song lacks emotion.
there is this "idea" of a hypocritical madman wishing palaces upon those whom he destroys with phosphorous-bombs...and all...yeah....
but feeling*...feeling~....feeling/.....what do we FEEL!^%@(&???
suggestion> one deep long sonorous underlying progression to throw the vibe into
something which actually AFFECTS us emotionally.
it's on the tips of your fingers.
get out the shovel.